I chose journal eight from week four for my third entry. Our journal was to be about a first of something, I titled my entry “Little Green Machine”. It is about my first car that I had bought as a teenager. This was actually a fun little story to write because I remembered how well my brothers and I got along as shown in one line from the story. “I got the car home and went straight to work on it, within the first day my brother and I had engine pulled and started cleaning it up, getting ready to rebuild it”. After only four weeks in school and my writing has gone from single line messages and notes to multiple paragraphs.
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